Author’s note: This isn’t an essay. It’s an excerpt from one of my books. I don’t say much here on Glibs that is particularly thoughtful because I’ve already said it either in a book or on my blog. I work out what I think while I’m writing. I try not to be didactic in my storytelling, but I probably am.
This is a post-argument conversation between our (tidge naïve) bond trader math professor hero Jack and (street savvy) concert pianist music professor heroine Daisy while they are cooped up in a tiny dark room and tiny bed together. They’re both irritated over sex and why they aren’t having it right that moment.
• • •
“Talk to me about something.”
“What,” he snapped.
“Money.”
His eyes popped open. “What about her?”
“That. You called money ‘her.’ You did it yesterday, too. You talk about money like it’s a person.”
Shit, the second he thought she couldn’t surprise him, she turned around and did. He swung his foot up into bed again and laid on his back. She turned on her side and rested her hand on his chest.
“Money,” he began slowly, thinking. He hadn’t given this lecture in years because the people he taught were too analytical for anything but the math. They wanted skills, not philosophy. “Isn’t a person. She’s an entity. One who’s quiet and restful when she’s being kept in balance, well tended, appreciated. One who’ll rip you to shreds if you do something that upsets her equilibrium, not because she’s pissed off, but because that’s just her nature. She must be in balance. Like a ship. She’s fine when the weather’s good, but she’ll still sink if you’re not tending her, making little repairs so they don’t become big problems. When a storm comes along, she has a hard time getting back into balance.”
“What’s the ocean?” she asked softly.
“People. The ocean, the weather cannot be controlled but you’re forced out into it. The ship can be controlled to a certain extent, but you have to pay attention. No ship comes out of a storm without damage, without loss, but someone is going to pay for the repairs or the loss.”
“But what about rich people?”
“‘People’ is the operative word,” he said, winding up with the promise of a decent conversation with somebody who might understand after all. “That money is carefully tended, yes, but anything can happen. There are few things that can bankrupt the superwealthy. But economies can collapse. More and more worthless pieces of paper can be printed. A government can come in and take it all away from you. A revolution could happen and then you become Marie Antoinette. Those are things people do, though we talk about them in the collective. Economies. Currency. Governments. Revolutions. People make up those things.”
“What about Mother Nature?”
“She’s the supreme bitch and I don’t fuck with her, either. Coffee. Grain. Cocoa. Oranges. Hell, no, I’m not touching anything Mother Nature can get her hands on, but she’s not part of this discussion.”
“Okay. But if the ocean is people and not Mother Nature, then the metaphor still isn’t complete,” she returned, shocking him again. Even if people did humor him or even understand him to this point, they dropped out of the conversation, thinking it was complete. “Ships sink and then disintegrate.”
“But then,” he said throatily, suddenly very turned on and running a fingertip softly down her naked, lush body, “what you have left is wealth.”
“Huh?”
“Wealth is knowledge. The knowledge that she was there, the knowledge of how to build another ship. Wealth isn’t paper money or gold or anything else you can barter. Wealth is being able to live a fairly decent life without having to worry about any of that. Wealth is having what you need and being happy with what you have and the knowledge to replenish.”
Silence. For a long time. While her thumb stroked his belly. It wasn’t his nipple, wasn’t his dick, wasn’t his lips, but fuck a duck, it felt good. “By that definition,” she finally said. Slowly. “Diogenes was wealthy.”
He wanted to kiss her. Right now.
“No,” he said, feeling her body twitch a little in surprise. “Diogenes was the ballast in the ship of money.”
“Um … but strangers gave Diogenes whatever he had and he was happy with it.”
God, he wanted to kiss and lick her from her chipped-neon-green-painted toes to the end of the longest strand of her hair. They were naked now. He could do that.
Maybe not. Because now he had things to say to someone who got him.
“Diogenes wasn’t happy with what he had because he wasn’t happy with what everybody else had. Diogenes made a virtue of poverty, which was stupid, because if nobody has anything, everybody dies. For real. That’s it. But strangers gave to him for whatever reason. Maybe giving made them happy. Maybe seeing him sitting there made them feel guilty for what they had that he didn’t. Maybe they believed in what he taught and wanted to support him in that. Doesn’t matter why. Diogenes’s philosophy was shit. His father was a banker, did you know that?”
“No.”
Jack laughed. “Yeah. So money stayed in balance because people gave. When you have too much ballast or too much cargo on the deck, money is out of balance.”
For once in his meager acquaintance with Daisy, she was the one who was stumped. Unprepared. Unlearned. He liked this feeling, the feeling of meeting her on an intellectual field and having the edge. “Where do you fit into that?”
“I’m the guy up in the ropes walking on the beams and taking up the sails or dropping them or whatever they do up there. Trying to keep her moving when the wind’s against her. Trying to keep her steady when the storms are coming.”
“You love her.”
And now he wanted to make love to Daisy all fucking night long, which he couldn’t do because she was still pissy about the clothes.
“I do,” he answered, “but not like most people mean it. ‘I love money.’ No, I love her as an entity, as a philosophy, a concept of balance. Like a ledger.”
“Mmm, okay. Then I have a question for you.”
“Shoot.”
“Where do underground economies and black markets fit on the ship of money? They exist. They have to serve some purpose or, by your description, the ship wouldn’t be balanced at all.”
His mind went blank. Totally and completely blank. He was speechless. A fucking piano teacher had blindsided him with his own philosophical musings. “Daisy,” he said throatily. “Either you stop being so fucking brilliant or I’m going to jack off right here.”
She chuckled softly. “Answer the question.”
“I dunno,” he admitted easily. “Econ isn’t my specialty, so I never thought about it. I’ve never seen it. Until I got here.”
“The way I look at it is Diogenes isn’t the ballast. The black market is the ballast. Hidden, but important. Rocks, sand, ordinary things that do as much to keep the ship sailing as the sails do. The stuff that keeps the ship steady when the storm really starts rolling. Diogenes is on some deck inside the ship, being taken care of from the top and the bottom. And when the ship breaks up and sinks, the ballast floats to the bottom of the ocean, under all the people. But they’re still doing what they do. Sitting there, minding their own business, which is business. Pure business. Providing shelter to the deep sea creatures. Hiding them from predators. Feeding them when the ocean—people—makes moss grow on them.”
He said nothing. His chest was too tight and his dick too hard and his body too tense. She couldn’t talk and have sex at the same time. The stuff that dried her up got him hard and ready to whisper sweet economic philosophies in her ear while stroking in and out, slow and steady.
“People still come to power,” he finally said. “Even in the underground. Organized crime. Gangs. Using fear and intimidation.”
“The same thing the IRS uses.”
“What?”
“You do understand the IRS is holding a gun to your head, right? Why do you comply? Because if you don’t, you’ll get thrown in jail. If you do anything somebody in power doesn’t like, they can use the IRS to somehow get to you. You don’t pay taxes because you’re ethical. You pay them because you have no choice. You believe it’s immoral not to follow the law, yes?”
“More or less, yes.”
“Have you ever considered that the law and regulations are immoral?”
“Stealing is immoral,” he said, irritated that she was diverting from the interesting part of the conversation.
“That is a natural law,” she replied. “The IRS is a manmade institution designed to control the populace. And by providing receipts, filing 1099s, W-2s, you are complicit in that control. You don’t have to report all that. You do it because you want the write-off and that’s where your thinking ends, but it’s not about you. The black markets, the underground, would rather take its chances with an enemy they can see and fight if they have to, to get ahead, to climb the economic ladder. No, I misspoke. They’re building their own ladder.
“Topside, with small businesses, they’re regulated to death. Margins are slim to none. One bad month can make them homeless. In a storm, you can hang on to whatever’s up there. Diogenes can cower somewhere inside the ship before it goes down. I, the black market, the ballast, can function anywhere under any circumstances. The mom’n’pops, the ones paying taxes and licenses like they’re supposed to because they’re ethical, the ones who really take care of Diogenes, but might also be paying protection money, they’re the ones who get washed overboard first. Almost nothing to hang on to. No walls to keep them safer until the storm passes.”
He was silent for a long, long time, turning all those concepts over in his head, so many of them packed into a few sentences, things he’d never thought about. But she was wrong about one thing. “I have to report wages. It is about me.”
“I won’t dispute that for you or any company like yours, you’d have to give the appearance of it. But it’d be easy to pay people from an offshore account—”
“That’s illegal.”
“But is immoral?”
He almost said yes automatically but stopped. Was it?
“Do you eat the cost of your employees’ withholding? Pay their share of the social security as well as yours? You could. If you have independent contractors, you can just not send them a 1099 and nobody would ever know because they aren’t going to report it and if they did, they do it from their internal bookkeeping. Likely they wouldn’t notice you didn’t send them a 1099 at all. You do it because it’s a write-off that feels like an obligation.”
“I’d go bankrupt inside six months if I did that,” he protested.
“And that’s how the IRS makes sure you’re complicit. Think about it. Your bottom line would improve if you could just pay people what they earned.”
She was fucking with his mind.
“That’s how the underground economy works. Do you know how many of your colleagues use illegal aliens to clean their houses and watch their kids? No, you don’t, because your domestics are on the record and you make sure all the T’s are crossed and the I’s are dotted. It wouldn’t occur to you to do anything else or that eighty percent of your peers hire under the table.”
“Okay, but exploiting those people is immoral.”
“Then you have to ask yourself if employing those people under the table is more or less immoral than letting them starve.”
“They choose to come here.”
“In hopes of a better future. Jack, look. I’m not trying to defend something you think is immoral or convert you. I want you to think about what the ballast really is.”
The only thing he could really think about at the moment was how Daisy was so much more than someone who listened to him even if she didn’t understand some things, but asked questions until she did, which meant she was listening. And then could give him something entirely new.
Not new information. Information was cheap and easy once one knew where to find it. New concepts. New principles. New philosophies. She made him think and thinking was his most favorite thing to do.
But when she didn’t say anything more, his thinking gradually turned to feeling—feeling her hand on his chest, caressing more, massaging, looking for the knots, going deeper into his muscles. It felt so good, he didn’t know whether he wanted her to keep doing that or give him the handjob his dick was begging for.
“There are more things involved in the balance you’re looking for,” she whispered, pressing her lips to his cheek. “It’s not just the money. Ethics don’t start with laws and stop with accurate numbers in a ledger. Morality and ethics involve people, and at your core, you just don’t like people.”
“Its all about money, and aint a damn thing funny”
BOOM!
Now hit my mother f’in Theme Music !
h/t Grandmaster Flash
How to pick up pussy like a pro.
You can also just volunteer at SICSA or the Humane Society.
When he picks it up, it looks dead inside.
If that elfin-lookin’ dude touched me, I’d be traumatized as well!
That’s the look cats get when they’ve done the cost-benefit analysis on clawing the shit out of you or just going to their happy place until you go away and the latter won, but just barely.
*unzips*
Go on…
Spoiler: They do have sex shortly thereafter.
Shhhh… I want to buy the book and see how it ends!
And they lived happily ever after?
How many money shots are described?
I can’t remember. I’ve written a whole lot of ’em.
“It’s not just the money. Ethics don’t start with laws and stop with accurate numbers in a ledger. Morality and ethics involve people, and at your core, you just don’t like people.”
Um, yes, I don’t like people either, but….
…but there’s a whole lot more to that discussion. 😉
Morality and ethics involve people, and at your core, you just don’t like people.”-
What a twist! I’m the dude in the story.
It’s amazing how well she knows us all!
*high five*
We are all the Dude in the story, so maybe……….. HE’S TULPA!
Hey Yusef, are those reusable filters for the AC a good idea?
…and at your core, you just don’t like people.
Nice! Love that song.
Try this one
*happy sigh*
More for your playlist
I like the updated version more:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H-RBJNqdnoM
Is it bad that I’ve already cast The Pholosopher in the role of Daisy?
No. I just won’t tell you whom *I* cast as Daisy.
I knew this was autobiography all along!
Pssst…Mira Sorvino.
I thought is was just (((us))) who found money sexually arousing. I must withdraw to consider this new data point…
LOLOLOL Later she talks about stories being the data points of one’s life all strung together. He doesn’t care about that shit.
Good Stuff Mojeaux, would like to read more,
Thanks!
Thank you Yusef!
I was expecting Diogenes to give people blow jobs in exchange for the money.
Try the Flying J……
Little Boy Blue. Hey! He needed the money.
+1 Ohhhhhhh!
He’s not gay, but 20 bucks is 20 bucks.
On the plus side, the story doesn’t have either STEVE SMITH or the hat and the hair.
I shudder to think what this would be with the mark of SugarFree on it.
The whole interaction was quite something to read, but this particular bit really spoke to me.
I love that the simple concept of paying people what they’ve earned is 1) blowing his mind, 2) moral on a really fundamental level, and 3) serves to underscore the point that legality really doesnt equate to morality all the time… maybe not even most of the time
He knows nothing about culture, and she’s a music professor. At some point, he brings up something about music that gives her something to think about, so the mind-blowing is not one-sided. He is also very attuned to humans and their needs (he’s a salesman, after all), so he really knocks it out of the park for her.
Lost a comment so… take 2.
That was cool, Mojeaux.
Pretty sure most here have an appreciation of the difference between money and wealth but I like the analogies of the different decks and ballast and the relevance of black markets.
And I assume that you wrote this part in church.
I cannot count how many sex scenes I’ve written in church. *ducks lightning*
Then the Old Testament would really blow your mind.
Also blows your mind.
Shhhh. We don’t talk about Those Things.
Nuns are married to God.
I am of the opinion a healthy economy cannot exist without black markets.
Id say that a “healthy economy” has minimal government involvement, and the presence of a black market is marginal due to the abundance of a free market.
But, I have a vivid imagination, too.
Paint all markets black!
#BlackMarketsMatter
I totally forgot about that song. Thanks!
Remind me of this .
Perhaps I should say, when an economy is ALLOWED to be healthy, which ours is not.
I recently read something about illegal immigration and labor markets that posited something to that effect. Essentially, illegal immigrants working off the books reclaims some of the deadweight loss created by things like minimum wage laws, the ACA, stuff like that, and when states pass laws that crack down on undocumented workers the result is typically that labor costs rise, which makes prices rise and drives companies that operate on thin margins out of business, along with somewhat diminished negative impacts on general cost of living due to lost usage tax (sales, fuel, etc.) that was paid by the illegals who moved away.
I’m not sure I buy it all, but the labor cost in the ag sector seems legit if you look at places like Georgia, for instance.
Hawt.
And thought provoking.
One of the reasons I married my wife was that our first weekend away together we spent a great deal of time in a fancy resort alternating between reading Adam Smith and fucking our brains out.
Well, that sounds pretty much like paradise.
Hawt.
George and Eddie did better work here .
IMO.
Charles and Eddie
Eddie and the Cruisers.
1099s and light erotic content…. this might be more perverse than a SugarFree installment.
I don’t think that’s possible.
I had no idea that women were allowed to indulge their men.
While you’re handy- I mean to ask about japanese and their fondness for wearing hardhats everywhere (at least laborers it seems) after your link to the JAL article. The picture showed the baggage handlers, and they were wearing them, and based on my experience with working for Toyota, and the contractors at the steel mill, they seem really into it.
Any insight?
Do you want the boring, correct version or the other one?
I have 1 more beer. Use your best judgement.
Possibly correct: They love putting things on their head. Towels, helmets, caps, hats etc… Regulations are also followed to a tee in everything. Buddhist/Shinto influence maybe? It starts in elementary school where they have earthquake drills and every student has to wear a helmet or a fire proof sheet on their heads. They’re used to it from a young age.
Probably wrong: They have over sized heads in relation to their body sizes. This results in women being bow legged and the baby’s skull being excessively misshaped after birth. It will creep back into shape, somewhat, but many are left with a head that is flat in the back. Wearing a helmet allows for them to look like the have a round head. If they made a helmet that accurately reflected the shape of the average Japanese head, you could rest your beer on it while getting a ….. from them.
Strangely, Im aroused.
I call my wife “The Screwdriver”. “What does that mean?” “Well, I’m not talking about the Phillip’s head type”. Someday she’ll figure out what that means and I’ll be in big trouble.
I got that one Straff,
/Slopes? or Slants?
Racist. Of course not. “Flat head”.
Getting a what? Another beer?
Dogfish head.
I love going swimmin’ with bow legged women.
I’ll be in my bunk. With an adding machine.
+1 divide it and then multiply
That is the first time reading about economics and money policy has given me a chubby.
Talking about money while hard can lead to some interesting revealed preferences.
This is some smooth writing, Mojeaux. No clunkiness at all. You must’ve spent a lot of time on this or you’re an asshole and it just came out like that.
Thank you! I spent a lot of time. 🙂
Why can’t it be both?
Just wait till the next installment with a hooker and a dirty bishop….
That discussion involves Atlas Shrugged.
I thought it was a Dirty Sanchez.
Rusty Trombone for the win.
Mojeaux,a couple days ago you made a comment (I forget what) where I suggested a Sugar free/Mojeaut collaboration. You agreed. This cinches it.
Like the old campfire stort-telling game one writes a bit and then the other takes over. Destination – unknown.
SugarFree is soul-less, and her only mortal transgressions are dick-jokes in church.
Why would you seal her fate in such a manner as putting her in league with him?
Why not throw in Warty for a 3-way ?
Down, down to hell; and say I sent thee thither: I, that have neither pity, love, nor fear.
Something something and so Jack and Daisy puckered up, fully prolapsed both, and rectally smooched.
Good writing.
That, also, and if IRS discovers during the course of an audit that those 1099-MISCs for funds remitted from a bank account weren’t issued and registered in the form of 1096…at very least they go after the recipient for unpaid self-employment tax. Haven’t looked into whether the Client gets their ass fined whilst forcing them to file those old 1099s. I don’t care to find out first hand.
The revenuers deserve a special place in hell after twisting through a woodchipper.
Also, what book is this an excerpt from?
Black Jack. I will tell you now it’s what I consider my klunker book. Every author has one. Or two. It just happens to have bits in it I thought y’all might like.
Dan Brown has at least a dozen klunkers….
/Hey-Ohhh!
And at least a dozen $10 million in net worth.
/hey-oohh!!!!!
Thx
Write article
Do project
rewrite article
change project
rewrite article
Work on project
edit article
Dioramas, Beer and Writing about it, what Joy!
That’s always how it goes, innit?
When you rewrite a sentence, do you worry that you’re losing the flow that naturally comes with the initial thought? If so, what’s the countermeasure?
Toss it and rewrite, it works for Elton, with Dioramas though,it’s a bit different, sometimes
That’s a heavy question. I don’t write in sentences because I don’t think in words. I think in images. When I am writing I’m describing what I see and feel. I had to frame that discussion into a metaphor so I could clarify it for myself. I went through 3 iterations before I had what I considered a logical progression.
Then I started slicing out the repetitions, sidebars, and tangents. I will put tangents elsewhere. They’re good, they go with the STORY, but they don’t go with that particular scene.
So that scene I posted initially had enough dialogue that I carved it up into about four separate pieces and sprinkled them throughout the book. That doesn’t include what I trashed completely. Or little bitty bits and pieces I also put elsewhere. (Also, what is posted is not the entire scene.)
IRL, conversations bounce around. You know, it’s late at night, you’re with friends, you’re drinking, you’re all bouncing from topic to topic, memory to memory. But then maybe one of your friends says something provocative/philosophical, and the conversation gets serious and flows more logically. Point, counterpoint, questions, answers. Proper threading with proper blockquoting is that way.
But in fiction, the reader is part of the conversation, only he can’t speak and participate in this conversation. So the writer has to welcome him into the circle of friends and make it okay for him not to speak, but able to understand what these people are talking about.
I had to convert from Tactical to Strategic in my Diorama outlook, I can’t get the details like I could in 1/35 but the overall is Awesome, I don’t write, as a rule but how do you describe that? And there has to be a story behind every piece, a challenge, but lot’s of fun.
How would you describe what? Going from tactical to strategic? Do you mean an on-the-ground viewpoint or an overhead planning viewpoint?
A story behind each piece that you build or a story behind each movement a group of soldiers makes?
My First Diorama was Tactical, each unit had a story, and an overalll view of the Scene, but operationally, very small.
This is a small slice of a Strategic view, the unit are basically irrelevant to the story, Big Picture stuff in a small slice as it were.
Like, why are they where they are? what are they doing? All Tanks and Arty must be Period, ie. 1944, there must be a reason, or it’s fake, IMO
Thanks. Gives me something to think about.
You’re welcome.
People get joy from beer? :-p
Yes, and sometimes from writing about things, but you knew that Ted………………
/Smartass
Gotta give Drudge credit when it’s due. Brennan Loses Security Clearance. You couldn’t find a better picture to go with that headline.
Money IS a bitch. Especially if you’re a stupid fucking moron.
I couldn’t make it any further.
Go suffocate on a cartoonishly long, engorged dong, Adam Roberts.
But first surrender to me all automobile and consumer products that substantially require matter derived from petroleum engineering processes.
To quote the Drive By Truckers:
Suckin on what’s left of yer trust fund
Suckin on the end of a shotgun
He’s welcome to give me the trust fund.
Thanks so much for re-working this for the site, Mojeaux!
Thank you for posting it!
This is the opening scene to my favorite porno.
Mine.
This is my second favorite.
What’s that accent she has? Also, you have a thing for fat white dudes, don’t you?
What ever accent Lois is supposed to have. Rhode Island mixed with Long Island, I guess.
I got another local Beer, Victoria, from Riverside Brewing, 11% Abv, you can’t tell, Amber, with less Citrus than advertised, not bad
3.7/5
https://photos.app.goo.gl/fowhcSvuhG3eZstx8
Damn, I got here late.
Nice work. I could probably write all normal like this, but these bastards won’t let me struggle out of the muck. They’ve trained me with horror and praise to dance to the organ grinder’s tune.
“There are more things involved in the balance you’re looking for,” she whispered, pressing her lips to his cheek. “It’s not just the money. Ethics don’t start with laws and stop with accurate numbers in a ledger. Morality and ethics involve people, and at your core, you just don’t like people.”
Those are some fine sweet nothings to whisper.
Thank you, SF. That means a lot.
On topic: Them words is to flowery fer ma brain. Off topic: My candidate Griffin Jones didn’t win the primary for Senate. Too bad, awesome name.
Jerb!, You Tak betr’n that the, C’mon wid it!